Sunday, July 13, 2008

Justice in H-Town - Chapter 2 (reboot)

Over at Texas Pulp Writer, I have posted the rebooted version of Justice in H-Town, Chapter 2.

For those of you who have read the original version of chapter 2, you will notice a few differences. More than one judge and some of my fellow reviewers said that they wanted to see Anne Chambers in a more likable situation. The funny thing about being the writer: I know all the ins and outs of this character...I just need to clue the readers in, too.

A second idea that I had was that I wanted the mess Anne found herself in at the end of chapter 2 to be more dire in the reboot than in the original. I hope you like it.


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