After the re-write of chapter 4 yesterday, I ended up with a new final sentence.
But I didn't like it. Had I gone with the zinger in my revised chapter 4, I would have kick-started the story into a chase. Plus it would have revealed the truth about a separate character. Okay, so I know that's vague, so let me be clear.
One character calls the main character asking for his help. Had I gone with my ending of chapter 4, the reader would instantly know the situation of the caller. I don't want that to happen yet (partially because I don't know yet), so I rewrote the end of chapter 4, moved on to chapter 5 with the mystery still in place.
My morning session was a little slight, earning me only 753 words. I rallied at lunch and ended up with one word shy of 1,900 words for the day.
Day 1: 2,063 (47,937 remaining)
Day 2: 2,724 (4,787 total; 45,213 remaining)
Day 3: 2,189 (6,976 total; 43,024 remaining)
Day 4: 2,033 (9,009 total; 40,991 remaining)
Day 5: 1,769 (10,778 total; 39,222 remaining) *Rewrite of chapter 4
Day 6: 1,899 (12,677 total; 37,323 remaining)
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