I had to chuckle when I read the first two sentences: “It was night. It was hot.” (So, basically it was a dark and not-so-stormy night? Aren’t we writers cautioned not to start a book with the weather?) Nonetheless, I read on.
Pulp fiction is known for its pace. Old movies—film noir and others—are also known for their pace. It’s fast. Nowhere but in pulp fiction and old movies do men and women fall in love on sight. It happens to Swen Nelson, a sailor with $12,000 in hand and dreams of a life on land on a farm in
In my review for The Guns of Heaven, I commented on some of the asides written out and how they really didn’t serve the story like I expected them to do. Well, the opposite is true for Home is the Sailor. There’s an aside, just some conversation between two characters, that comes back around like a boomerang and hits you between the eyes. An astute reader will put two-and-two together before the characters do (I did, at least) but it still makes the story fun.
One sad thing I noticed is the paltry number of
Oh, about the ending: Just like Angel Dare in Money Shot, Swen Nelson gets a chance to really examine himself and ask the question “Who am I?” And we get the answer in a brilliant last line. Don’t flip to the end; it’ll ruin it for you. Just go with it. You’ll enjoy the ride.
What I Learned As A Writer: The aside I mentioned earlier is important. And, I realized, that it’s a great way to throw red herrings at the reader, assuming you have more than one. There was only one but its importance was revealed in layers. Granted, I was ahead of Nelson for most of the book but that didn’t disappoint me. Heck, I could’ve been wrong. In my future books, I’ll try to incorporate some extra asides, some extra little stories the characters learn, and leave it to the reader to decide which one is important.
Scott,
ReplyDeleteCome on, man, Keene most likely wrote Sailor in 2 or 3 weeks and got paid maybe $200. for the entire book, so let's forgive him the "it was night. it was hot."(Not to be rude or anything, this happened to be one of my first HCC's)
By the way, have you cracked any of the Bruen& Starr collaborations from HCC?
Keith,
ReplyDeleteGuess my attempt at sarcasm didn't translate well. I was actually joking about the opening two sentences. As a writer who, for various reasons, has been stuck with the same book for over a year, I marvel at the 3-week pace at which these guys wrote. Wish I could do it.
I have read Bust. Loved it. Not my favorite Bruen (The Guards still tops my list) but quite enjoyable. I have Slide here at the house. I just checked out The Wheelman and The Blonde (Duane S.--not going to attempt to spell his last name) and have started Wheelman. I also have American Skin on my shelf. Maybe this summer. What's on your shelf?